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@alan@mindly.social @kimlockhartga@beige.party @bookstodon@a.gup.pe try writing screenplays, where five line paragraphs are considered excessive π€£![]()
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@skribe@aus.social @kimlockhartga@beige.party @bookstodon@a.gup.pe LOL right now that's exactly what I'm trying to not do. I have sections with an excessive reliance on dialogue and action rather than ambience and scene. Maybe I'll keep some of that archived in case someone wants a movie version, but it makes for thin prose.