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Alan Langford πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸ§€πŸ§€πŸ§ŠπŸ§Šζ‘
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@skribe@aus.social @kimlockhartga@beige.party @bookstodon@a.gup.pe I will read more random samples in the book. The absence of dense prose isn't a show-stopper, but I admire those who can pull it off. Usually their shorter paragraphs are of similar calibre.

I dare say right now when I look at my own longer paragraphs there's a good chance that I'm rambling. I am not that good yet. Not by a significant margin. One day though, in my dreams...

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@alan@mindly.social @kimlockhartga@beige.party @bookstodon@a.gup.pe try writing screenplays, where five line paragraphs are considered excessive 🀣🀣


Alan Langford πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦πŸ§€πŸ§€πŸ§ŠπŸ§Šζ‘
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@skribe@aus.social @kimlockhartga@beige.party @bookstodon@a.gup.pe LOL right now that's exactly what I'm trying to not do. I have sections with an excessive reliance on dialogue and action rather than ambience and scene. Maybe I'll keep some of that archived in case someone wants a movie version, but it makes for thin prose.