Brutkey

Ben Royce πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡¦πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡¦ πŸ‡ΈπŸ‡©πŸ‡ΈπŸ‡©
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Mount Olympus is a massif while Mount Kilimanjaro is a stratovolcano

so:

🎢🎢 The wild dogs cry out in the night
As they grow restless longing for some solitary company
I know that I must do what's right

❌❌ Sure as Kilimanjaro rises like Olympus above the Serengeti

βœ…βœ… Sure as Kilimanjaro rises like Fuji above the Serengeti

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SeΓ‘n Fenian
@zakalwe@plasmatrap.com

@benroyce@mastodon.social "This mountain rises like this other mountain above the Serengeti" is still a godawful simile. Kilimanjaro does not rise like Olympus or Fuji above the Serengeti, it rises like freaking Kilimanjaro above the Serengeti.

"Rises like a stormcloud" would have been a hundred times better a simile. And it even scans.

Ben Royce πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡¦πŸ‡ΊπŸ‡¦ πŸ‡ΈπŸ‡©πŸ‡ΈπŸ‡©
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YES

PREACH

Vassil Nikolov | Васил Николов
@vnikolov@ieji.de

Mount Olympus rises above a sea.
For Euterpe's sake...

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